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At the top of my beanstalk, by Hannah I saw some silver and gold coins at the top of the beanstalk At the top of the beanstalk, by Norah Jack climbed up a tall beanstalk. |
by Francesca |
‘What I did over Easter’ by Jaya
I went to the funfair with my mum and dad and my brother and I went on a horse ride. Then I went home and somebody visited.
The Form 1 winners from our recent Essay writing competition were, in no particular order, James, Stephanie, Annabelle, Sukhpreet and Jaya. You can rad their winning essays below:
‘The Tunnel’, by James
One day there was a boy called James. He was walking down the road and he saw some stairs. He went down the stairs and saw a tunnel. He went into the tunnel and got to the other side. He saw a baby dragon and took it home. It grew and grew and grew until it was too big so it had to go home through the tunnel. James said goodbye and it went through the tunnel and back home.
‘The Tunnel’, by Stephanie
Once upon a dream in the night I was in my bed and I was dreaming about running in a tunnel. When I was in the tunnel I bumped into Annabelle. We knew each other. I said “Hello” and Annabelle said “Hello.” We found a rocket and we went in it. We blasted off. We went up and up and up and up, then we went crashing down. We landed in the ground and we were trapped. We found a way out. We came out of the trap. We walked home and we all lived happily ever after.
‘The Tunnel’, by Annabelle
Once upon a time I had a dream. It was about me and Stephanie. We went in to a tunnel under the street. It was very dark. The tunnel had lots of rocks and we kept tripping over. We saw a ghost. We made friends with it. The ghost led us to a house and it was my house. We went inside and had dinner and then Stephanie went home.
‘The Dark Tunnel’, by Sukhpreet
One day I was playing in the garden. I saw a hole. I went down it. I saw a mole and some rocks. He led me through the tunnel. It was very dark. I got stuck in a place full of lots of tunnels. We didn’t know which way to go so we went back again and I climbed out of the hole but the mole didn’t come with me!
‘The Tunnel’, by Jaya
One day I went to London on the train. We went through a tunnel. It was dark outside the train. We got out of the train, down the steps into a lift and tried to get a taxi. We went to the zoo and the aquarium because we all wanted to see sharks.
Visit to ‘Peter Pan’ by Sukpreet
Captain Hook had a bomb. He threw the bomb to Peter Pan then Peter threw the bomb out of the window.
At the top of my beanstalk, by Hanna
At the top of my beanstalk there was a magic land. I could see some flowers and some trees and a castle and the trees were mostly fruit and the castle was yellow and orange.
Christmas, by Stephanie
Christmas Day was exciting because I got lots of presents. My best present was a CD player with a microphone. I had a planet structure which you stick on the ceiling.
Christmas, by Harry
I had some presents for Christmas. I have a skateboard and a transformer which are my best presents.