Form 2

Spring Term 2008

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‘The Magic Egg’ by Himani 

One day I found a magic egg in a piece of blossom. It was light blue like the sky. It also had multi-coloured pearls on it. I knew it was magic because it kept changing its pattern. It cracked open. It had a message saying please go to the Easter bunny shop. It gave me some instructions. I walked down to Cecil Street. Then I turned left. There was a shop, I walked in. on the message it said this thing would have my name on it. I found it. It was a cute bunny. I took it to the pet shop. I bought lots of bunny biscuits, hay and a cage. I took them home and showed my mum and I played with it all day.

‘The Magic Egg’ by Mariam 

One day I found a magic egg. The egg was in China. Inside it was a Chinese baby dragon. I knew it was magic because the shell was small and the dragon was quite big. Something happened and the Chinese dragon had wings but it didn’t spray out any fire. The dragon was very kind and it wasn’t really bad, just good. I went on a big adventure and it was called Legoland. I made a flower out of Lego and it was fun. The Chinese dragon took me to China and then back home.

‘The Magic Egg’ by Alexander 

One day I found a magic egg. The egg was as big as the Taj Mahal. It was in South. It was in South America. It was in the trees. A jaguar was in the trees. I climbed it. The jaguar saw me. I grabbed the egg. I ran to Central America. I wasn’t tired.

I ran to North America. I swam to India. I found another egg. I opened it and there was a message and it turned into a dragon. We were friends. He helped me find eggs.

‘The Magic Egg’ by Jordan 

One day I found a magic egg and there was a button and I opened the egg. There was a half rabbit, half robot and it was cool. I went home and then I saw another egg and I opened it. It was half chicken and half robot and they were friends until they were teenagers. They never shared then. When robot rabbit was on his i-pod he remembered his friend, robot chicken. Then he went to chicken and said sorry. “That’s OK.

The Form 2 winners from our recent Essay writing competition were, in no particular order, Jonathan and Himani. You canread their winning essays below:

‘The Tunnel’, by Jonathan

Last week it was Christmas and it was snowing. My brother and I were making a snowman. It was big and it had a carrot on it too. We found a tunnel and it was very dark. We heard a voice. It was a low voice. I went to see and saw a man. He looked like a magic man, so I asked his name.

“My name is Dived, and I am a magic man. I want to show you a magic trick.”

Then we went to a magic world. It had some flowers and lovely fishes. There was a big rocket. I went up in it. It said, “Five, four, three, two, one, blast off!”

It went to the moon where there were aliens. “What is your name?” said an alien.

“My name is Jonathan. I have to go back to Earth now. ‘Bye, ‘bye.” I went back in my rocket and went home. Then I went through the tunnel and went home.

‘The Tunnel’, by Himani

One day I went to a country called New Zealand. My mum dropped me at Tiwanato airport. When I was there I saw a colourful tunnel which had a name. Its name was Stripy. Stripy said, “Hello, what is your name?”

I said, “My name is Himani.”

Stripy said, “Would you like to go through me?”

“Yes please!” So I ran through as fast as I could. There was a land called Kittens and Puppies Land. The kittens were so cute, so were the puppies. I took the puppies out for walks and gave them dog chocolate which was called Illypi Fuzz. After a while, Stripy said, “You are allowed the puppy with the brown patch on his eye and you can have the white kitten.”

I went back through the tunnel with my puppy and kitten. I went to the airport. When I was back home I played with my pets all day.

My Colour Poem, by Himani

The yellow sun shines brightly

In the light blue sky.

Pink summer flowers burst open and bloom.

Shallow blue water flows across the stream

And splashes against the grey rocks.

White is the snow resting on the brown branches.

Silver is the trophies being carved.

My Colour Poem, by Jonathan

Light blue is the sky

And dark blue is the sea.

Grass green is my apple for break.

Orange is an exploding firework

In the dark blue sky.

Gold is the roof of the Taj Mahal.

Black is a cat all alone in a street,

White is a skeleton and a clean bit of paper.

My Colour Poem, by James

My colour poem is a juicy apple when it is ripe.

Dark blue is the sea

Splashing with massive waves.

Green is for the wavy grass I see

Before my mum cuts it.

White is the Taj Mahal,

Which shines like silver.

Yellow is the sun

Which makes the world go round.

The mysterious box, by Alexander

I saw a box in a jungle. It was in a tree. I climbed up the tree and then a cheetah chased me in t5he tree. I took the box then ran to my home. My pets a lion and a tiger helped me to get the box, then the cheetah saw us all and ran away.

he mysterious box, by Serena

One bright sunny morning my mum took me to the park and when I looked on the swing there was a box. I had to go home but I still had the box and when I went home I opened the box and I saw nothing. Then I had to go to bed and in the morning I looked in the box and the box was full of magical fairy-dust but then the magical fairy-dust vanished and so did the box. I had to go to bed and in the morning the box came back and when I opened the box, the box ran away and ran out of the window and never came back.

The mysterious box, by Himani

One day a girl called Emily went up four thousand stairs to clean up her attic. While she was cleaning it up she found some raggy clothes, hats and plastic signs. She saw some more things and she found a mysterious box. It had sequins on it. Emily loved it so much that she took it down stairs and opened it. It had a note saying the three wishes. It told Emily to make three wishes so she made them. They were to have a guinea pig and accessories, a rabbit and accessories and a horse and accessories. The next day she got them and looked after them all day.

The mysterious box, by Mariam

Once upon a time there was a girl. From the sky a box fell out in front of her. The girl said, “Boxes can’t fall out of the sky.” The girl said, “It’s got a glittery keyhole.” The girl got a map to the biggest tree to find the key. She went to the forest and found the biggest tree. The key fell in her hand. She unlocked the box and found a dress like Cinderella’s dress. The dress was magic and took her back home. The dress went inside the cupboard. The girl wanted to keep the box.

The mysterious box, by Jordan

One day a boy-mouse called Mouse was very hungry so he went out of the house. Then he saw a metal box. He opened it and it turned into a car. The key was in the car. A cat tried to get the mouse. So the mouse stepped on the pedal then the cat jumped on the car. It went so fast that the cat was worn out but the mouse crashed the car but the car went back into the driving mode and the cat got knocked out. Then he knew he could use the car for everything. So he pressed a mysterious button then the car turned into a game boy and he kept it for ever.

Trip to Peter Pan, by James

Yesterday we went to the Nuffield Theatre to see Peter Pan. I liked when Captain Hook and Peter Pan fought a battle and it was funny when Captain Hook jumped into the crocodile’s mouth. And I liked the lost boys and I liked the pirates.