Form
2
Summer Term
2007
Pupils' Page
These
are examples of Form 2's work this term.
Please
follow one of these links to see some of Form 2 pupils' work during the
Autumn Term and Spring
Term.
Essay
Competition Winners, Form 2, 2007
My Journey
into Space by George, First Prize
Once upon a time
there was a boy called George, One day George was playing in the garden
when all of a sudden a glimpse of something caught his eye. It was a pointed
looking thing. When George went over to the thing he found out that the
thing was actually a space ship. George got into the space ship and started
to fly. When he was in space he got blasted by a meteor into a strange
looking planet. Suddenly loads of aliens took George and the space ship
and threw them onto a meteor and the meteor took them home. George left
the spaceship and the aliens took it away to space again and George never
found it.
My
Journey into Space by Kieran, Second Prize
Once upon a time
a man called Joe learnt how to read the stars. He goes outside at 9pm,
to read the stars. Then one night he saw the star of space. That means
you will go into space. Joe said, “I will go into space.” The next morning
he went to the space station. The rocket was so big it could have been
taller than a giant. He went in the space station. He got on the rocket
and he took off. He saw Mars, the Moon, Venus and Pluto and then they
went home. They told their families about the journey.
The
Mysterious Egg, by Zoe, Third Prize
At Easter time
I went to my nana's house and when I got there she gave me an Easter egg.
I said thank you. The next morning I woke up at nine o'clock and had my
breakfast. For breakfast I had pancakes and they were delicious and then
I washed the thimbles. My nan has three hundred and ninety seven. That
is quite a lot of thimbles. After lunch for pudding I ate my Easter egg.
It was yummy, but in the middle there was a baby dragon. I had some great
fun with the dragon. We climbed trees but he always flew up to the top
and flew down, so he was cheating. I did not get very fond of him. The
next morning I opened the window. At first I thought he was going to fly
but he did not do so. I had a look at him. He had red eyes and green skin
and he had spikes down his tail. Then I opened the window again and he
flew out of the window. I missed him.
My
Journey into Space, by Lars, Highly Commended
Once upon a time
there lived a girl called Alison and a boy called Bubbafett. They all
wanted to go to space and they asked their Mum and Dad and they said yes.
They went into their rocket then Alison pushed the button and the rocket
flew up to space and they went to a planet and they saw an alien and he
came and tried and tried to break the rocket and Bubbafett was very angry
and he came to the alien. can you stop it said Bubbafett and the alien
ran away and they thought it was a nice3 planet to live on.
The
Mysterious Egg, by Abiola, Commended
Once upon a time
there was a little girl called Orla and one day she saw a big mysterious
egg. Then the egg popped open and a little green head popped out and everybody
laughed and laughed from seven o'clock till eight thirty. The green head
started to laugh too, “ha-ha, ha-ha, ha!” But then the whole wide world
started to laugh too and then everybody on the whole wide world started
to laugh too and everybody was laughing. It was too late to laugh but
they did not mind as God was laughing too but they didn't mind. By then
God was so, so, so, so angry because he knew they didn't have Easter eggs.

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